Hurt Poem by Melanie Emikohe

Hurt

Rating: 5.0


Time has never been this slow..
Each second, I get crushed -
If only that when I wake up
I've already served a tnousand sleeps!

Time has never been this slow,
Nothing that I could do to Change,
But to let pain walk its walk;
Songs are getting old and prayers don't work.

Saturday, July 14, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Lacovara 05 December 2018

What poet doesn't feel the grave pain of a broken heart? You have done well to remind us. I am told that time heals all pain, but in my own experience, time moves far too slowly when the heart yearns for what is lost. I commiserate in your sorrow. A good write!

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Vincent 14 July 2018

I'm sad... and not just for, but for us... it will get better!

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Kelly Kurt 14 July 2018

I was pleasantly surprised with the quality of your poem.

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Melanie 14 July 2018

I appreciate your time.

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Irfanulla Shariff 14 July 2018

Nicely penned your feelings. You have a great talent and charisma…you can change things around… it is just a matter of time. Great write! All the best! Big 10.

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Melanie Emiko 14 July 2018

Thank you.

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