Friday, July 31, 2009

Unself-Consciousness Comments

Rating: 3.2

Going too far
The thought in spirit
For the heightened experience
From the one hemisphere
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Sadiqullah Khan
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Sarwar Chowdhury 03 August 2009

dear sadiqullah, my inquisitive memory has detected here some dominant thinker, you are one of them. The term 'Unself' seems you successfully used. In this poem its emitting the beauty as crystalline sharpness! wonderful! Long live! bekhudi zindabad! 1000000000+

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Ejaz Khan 31 July 2009

A deep and inspirational write! Yes, the expressions of self are countless and not limited in any way by colour, creed, gender, geographical divisions or other things. I'm pleasantly surprised to find this kind of depthness in your poetry, keep it up!

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Catrina Heart 31 July 2009

The unself bombarded with similes in different categories...well implied composition.....the unself is composed of 1/4 of one's personality..........Thanks! ! ! 10+++

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