Unsentimental Poem by John Weber

Unsentimental

Rating: 5.0


The flow you bestow
makes all structure go
with spirit-popping visions
stalking from my mind
like henchmen, soul-blind
forcing destructive collisions.

Molecules vibrate
this atomic plate
until tissues charge right through
the fiber of all
meshed tight to enthrall
within this cosmic rendezvous.

Why I fail to see
pending gravity
bearing down upon my head
baffles patron saints
with cursing complaints
insisting I'm already dead.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joshua Whiting 06 November 2009

conscious raising! Good flow.

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Rachel Butler 28 October 2009

'The fiber of all meshed tight to enthrall' Rachel Ann Butler

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Patti Masterman 21 October 2009

This is really addicting. Your structure here is such a tight ship. Have to jump on board quick so as not to miss anything.

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John Weber

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