Untested Wings Poem by Patti Masterman

Untested Wings

Rating: 5.0


And what of the dreams you left behind,
to be where you are; was it worth the cost

Did you trade your soul for someone else's,
to live their life, count yours as lost?

Everyone dreams of being some other,
even the one you so long to be;

For everyone aches to fly far horizons,
stretching out new, untested wings.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Smoky Hoss 07 November 2011

Very good... and very true.

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Kevin Patrick 07 November 2011

I love the texture that embodies this poem, its brief but amazing depth, that circulates in my head after I read it. Superbe job, great write.

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Darkangel Flyfree 07 November 2011

Nice poem. If only we could be happy with who we are and not trying to be like someone else. We're all different thats what makes life interesting.

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