poet Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! * Untold Grip Of Sorrow*! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

skin seems roasted by scorching rays
sky is burning by heat of summer
sultry weather remembers autumn’s flow
anger never reels through by fear of love.

softness mellows by sweet feeling
where is smile latching on into hide?
oh emotion be cup of anger retreating
silence miffed yet untold by grip of sorrow

night still seems resilient by tear as dew
heart loses its rhythm riling upon wisdom
abstruse stillness redeems from penitence
as the reality insists upon truth of reason

Sorrow redounds deep in darkness in furrows
Humor blurs in dearth of rippling smiles
Sadness rides over the glow of ingenuity
Do you ever measure the distance of love?

Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 3, 2009

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  • Dr.subhendu KarDr.subhendu Kar (11/29/2009 4:51:00 AM)

    From : Ema B (sydney Australia; Female; 13)
    To : Dr.subhendu Kar
    Date Time : 11/29/2009 3: 31: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject : Re: hello,

    Dear fellow poet
    your poems were wonderful
    you are very talented
    I enjoyed reading your other poems to.
    I look up to you.
    Thank you.

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  • Mandara Pookal (11/16/2009 8:57:00 AM)

    You fare extremely well in this beautiful composition. god bless you. mandara

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  • Shanta Majumder (10/23/2009 10:36:00 AM)

    Sadness rides over the glow of ingenuity
    Do you ever measure the distance of love?

    ...just liked your writing...10 for these lines only

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  • Jimmy Reed (10/18/2009 8:13:00 AM)

    intense passionate and atonce resigned to the fateful deception of love unfulfilled.......10

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  • Roy Martinez (10/16/2009 12:29:00 PM)

    Nice and touching poem............10

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  • Nolan Trenton (10/14/2009 2:22:00 PM)

    Nice poem, good imagery.
    10

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  • Anand Madhukar (9/13/2009 4:04:00 AM)

    A somewhat dry and yet a profound reflection. Liked it a lot.

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  • Seema Joglekar (8/25/2009 4:38:00 AM)

    You got to be a saint to write like this,
    Where is your Muse? Who is your Muse for this ethereal imagery?
    What sanguine demons goad you to this verbal tapestry?
    Mine -gather around ina chimera of heaven & hell,
    And beat me to death -even before I hear the death knell.
    [Still needs a lot of work on it]

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  • Mel Atie (7/6/2009 4:28:00 AM)

    ermmm... i like this poem... like it...

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  • Callie Valentine (7/3/2009 1:28:00 AM)

    Wow, this is an amazing poem. You're so talented :)

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  • Ronald Doku (7/1/2009 5:03:00 PM)

    the first line really got me into the poem. i really liked it. not bad, not bad at all

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  • Ch J Satyananda Kumar (7/1/2009 1:03:00 AM)

    A melancholic poem with great depths of expressions. Congrats, Dr. Kar

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  • Christina Phan (7/1/2009 12:55:00 AM)

    A fanastic poem
    How do you mesure a distance of love?
    10+
    kept it Dr

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  • Lynda Robson (6/19/2009 1:30:00 AM)

    A beautifully written poem Dr, how indeed can you measure the distance of love?
    A 10 for this
    Lynda xx

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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/17/2009 7:37:00 PM)

    Sadness rides over the glow of ingenuity
    Do you ever measure the distance of love?

    u can't. it is immesurable... what nice idea. beautiful write and eye catching imagination and truth also.....10

    love o, mother, papa do u know and papa u too. all love filled poems

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  • Carl Harris (6/16/2009 2:37:00 PM)

    This is a well written poem, Dr. Kar, especially for one that does not seem to have much emotion in it's lines. It seems more a scholarly dissertation on the subject rather than a poem of passion that I was expecting. Still, not to take away from this fine write, your poem was quite well expressed just the same. Carl.

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  • Marieta MaglasMarieta Maglas (6/16/2009 1:59:00 PM)

    I can see here deep cognitive metaphors like:
    ''Sorrow redounds deep in darkness in furrows
    Humor blurs in dearth of rippling smiles
    Sadness rides over the glow of ingenuity''
    By using abstract notions, well hidden in metaphors, the poem achieves its style and refinement and suggests that love can defeats the natural barriers by ascesis....10++++

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  • L.P. Alexanders (6/16/2009 10:19:00 AM)

    Do you ever measure the distance of love? insightful query, another one would be How could you measure the distance of love? but as John Donne's famous poem 'A Valediction: Forbidden Mourning' there's no separation or distance in a true love, but an expansion of it! a very positive way to look at it, isn't it?
    great piece of work! !

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  • Mittur Ramprasad (6/16/2009 9:20:00 AM)

    Before grip of sorrow
    Makes a deep furrow
    Deep in the heart
    Tearing it apart


    Armor there is none.
    No safe place to run
    Wise it is to face
    In so many ways

    Before grip of sorrow
    Makes a deep furrow
    Deep in the heart
    Tearing it apart

    Everyone is susceptible
    To become cripple
    Caught in the claws
    Of life with loss

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  • Sandra Fowler (6/16/2009 5:13:00 AM)

    You ask a profound question at the conclusion of this elegiac piece.
    Love is as immeasurable as sorrow, I believe. Excellent write.,
    as always.

    Warm regards,

    Sandra

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