Saturday, February 10, 2007

Up On A Shining Star Comments

Rating: 5.0

Wings of dreams
And shine of pearls
Away from worldly schemes,
That’s where we’re perched-
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a moment of sadness 13 February 2007

well p.d. you've done it again you've given me another poem with just what i needed, just when i needed it keep it up

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Jim Foulk 12 February 2007

a very nice write, very simple and well said.

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Catastrophe King 11 February 2007

Beautiful! Every poem of yours nowadays is turning to be better than the earlier.... you are marvelling..... I loved the way you have used the imagery and the visualisation of the 'Wings of dreams and shine of pearls'......... indeed worth the visit here!

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Roger Bowman 10 February 2007

Lovely write, great write, great poemo Take care Roger

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Tranquil Ocean 10 February 2007

Glad to see you perched up there....lol! ! But seriously...this is a lovely poem.Reading you after a long time...Have been lost up there? ! Love...TO

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Asma Bahrainwala 10 February 2007

hey preets... this is an excellent poem... just love the images, the idea, everything... love, Asma...

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