Up On A Shining Star Poem by .Pd. is here

Up On A Shining Star

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Wings of dreams
And shine of pearls
Away from worldly schemes,
That’s where we’re perched-
Up on a shining star,
Where senses are stirred, by-
Saccharine fragrances, twang of guitar,
Taste of ecstasy, touch of skin and
Gazing at you, my sweetest sin.

Up on a shining star, the
Moonbeams shine on us
Glowing in approval of our sacred love.
The sky erupts in a show of dazzle,

Because,
Every love story is special and
Every love story is worth of
Growing wings of dream and shine of pearls.
Every love story is worth of
Escaping worldly schemes and to be perched
Upon a shining star!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Asma Bahrainwala 10 February 2007

hey preets... this is an excellent poem... just love the images, the idea, everything... love, Asma...

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a moment of sadness 13 February 2007

well p.d. you've done it again you've given me another poem with just what i needed, just when i needed it keep it up

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Jim Foulk 12 February 2007

a very nice write, very simple and well said.

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Catastrophe King 11 February 2007

Beautiful! Every poem of yours nowadays is turning to be better than the earlier.... you are marvelling..... I loved the way you have used the imagery and the visualisation of the 'Wings of dreams and shine of pearls'......... indeed worth the visit here!

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Roger Bowman 10 February 2007

Lovely write, great write, great poemo Take care Roger

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Tranquil Ocean 10 February 2007

Glad to see you perched up there....lol! ! But seriously...this is a lovely poem.Reading you after a long time...Have been lost up there? ! Love...TO

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