Saturday, September 7, 2013

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Rating: 5.0

‘How much more can one bear? ’
Her words almost emerged from the rain
And echoed in the droplets’ din on the soil,
‘How much and how much more? ’
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Pradip Chattopadhyay
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Tribhawan Kaul 08 September 2013

It is a wonderful poem. It speaks a lot about a woman betrayed and exploited. I really admire the imagery created of a women lamenting about her life and also poet's helplessness.10/10

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Rebekah Daniel 08 September 2013

To understand the feeling of a woman, being a man, its impressive.

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Lorraine Colon 07 September 2013

Intense lament of a woman, out of desperation. I don't know her, but I feel her pain. Beautifully written.

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Neela Nath Das 07 September 2013

Loved the imagery coming one after another to make the idea complete.

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Dave Walker 07 September 2013

A really great poem, like it, s great write.

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