Jennie Renee Sparrow

Gold Star - 5,736 Points (November 8th / Tahlequah, Oklahoma)

Valentino - Poem by Jennie Renee Sparrow

I don't care if you hate me
I don't even care if you love me
I wouldn't mind if you stayed
It won't bother me if you go
Where are you when you go away
Where it leaves us we don't know
My aches and pains they don't mind
And I won't mind all of your lies
There must be something in my wine
You're my bloody valentine
You seem you have somewhere else to be
There were so many things I didn't see
Late night rendezvous
An empty house without you
Where are you going so late
I'm left here for another date
Something is wrong I'm feeling weak
Can't get up from this deep sleep
Flowers and chocolates they aren't mine
You're my bloody valentine
I didn't expect you to be back so soon
The next day a quarter till noon
All of the traces of you were left behind
You purposely erased them from your mind
Now that I have you right where I want you
Suddenly confused and you don't know what to do
You came back expecting me to be dead
But you were the perfect victim instead
It was never meant to be and was the perfect crime
You drank the poison that was supposed to be mine
You were always my perfect bloody valentine

Topic(s) of this poem: poison, valentine, valentines day

Poet's Notes about The Poem

©Dark Sparrow
#bloodyvalentine #somethinginthewine #storytellers #valentino #valentina #vdaydarkpoem

Comments about Valentino by Jennie Renee Sparrow

  • Robert Murray Smith (2/13/2017 1:03:00 PM)

    An excellent poem, but hardly romantic, more platonic.+++10

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Poem Submitted: Monday, February 13, 2017

Poem Edited: Monday, February 20, 2017

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