The cold autumn breeze feels good for the first minute
After that it's cold bloody wind chills me to the bone
Cold metal through my skin makes me numb
I can't feel my feet or my fingertips
It's a silver tongued devil that slips through my veins
I feel myself fade off into a bitter cold place
My soul starts to freeze unto a frozen star
The breeze rushed through what was left of me
I took a deep breath to find myself again
I watched myself escape the electrified hold it had on me
I broke free from its metallic components
Pulling the shards of crystallized diamonds out of my skin for the last time
Cold autumn breeze gives amazing cold feeling at first moment. This is a brilliant poem wisely penned and shared...10
Thank you! Comparison of how the autumn leaves us and the winter approaches.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Oh I hate winter! ! Cold heartless metal is a great description, I certainly agree, good meter
Thank you! I hate winter weather and knowing the beautiful autumn is coming to an end as the harsh winter begins.