*venus Poem by Randy Hogan

Randy Hogan

Randy Hogan

pænˈ dʒ iː ə Mountain Range

*venus

Rating: 3.3


The sun brings me warmth against my skin,
but it doesn't warm me within
but the night brings me back to you again.
Over and over.
There I am lost in your loving light
for the twilight that twinkles around your beauty
that rains down on me as silvery mist
there I get lost in the sweetest Dreams
Of my Venus

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Reshma Ramesh 21 June 2009

such a sweet one........with love notes....warms the heart

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Anjali Sinha 20 June 2009

the warmth of nature is nicely brought out here as metaphors of love -10 anjali

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Miriam Maia Padua 20 June 2009

very romantic, my friend.. makes me feel like floating with the stars in the sky touching all those twinkling stars.... and seeing venus, , , the Goddess of Beauty and love so sweet...words are so impressive...smilesss 10+++++++++ for this lovelots, maia

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So romantic Randy. Venus the planet of love and the need to be close to another warms you within. It is all perfect. 'the night brings me back to you over and over' just worked so well for me. 10 Karin Anderson

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