Coreena Dejesus

Rookie (May 9,1984 / USA (Born in MA) (Raised in MI))

Very Corney Poem (Written While Deployed) - Poem by Coreena Dejesus

As you look in the mirror what is the refection you see,
You send a picture as if your looking at me,
Baby your so sexy and and oh so sweet,
Like you were designed to be my special treat.

I looked at the calendar 69 days to go,
Just going through the motions although,
I can't wait to look into your deep brown eyes,
Dreaming about you in between my thighs.

Fighting with you twice a week,
Your every action I cant help to critique,
I love you more then you'll ever know,
Twisted love and a weird way to show.

Soon I'll be stepping of that plane,
Celebration, bottles popping, champagne,
Our problems evaporating into thin air,
Till that day I sit here and just prepare.


Comments about Very Corney Poem (Written While Deployed) by Coreena Dejesus

  • (10/31/2007 2:29:00 AM)


    i love this it feels like you are having fun writing this one.this was really fun and light hearted.i love it (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, July 17, 2007

Poem Edited: Tuesday, March 22, 2011


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