Wake Up Call ★ Poem by Coreena Dejesus

Wake Up Call ★

Rating: 5.0


I have so much anger it's so hard to get past.
I just want to be able to smile and be happy at last.
This is tearing me apart, and for what?
I'll leave one day, and you'll be happy with some sluutttt!

I have so many questions, I'm just so confused.
Do you fight for love, just in the end to lose?
If you love me, then why do you cause me so much pain?
Staying in this relationship, is making me insane.

In October debating to put you out that door.
Will I look back and regret for ever more?
They say love is worth a million words,
Then why is the emotion striking like a thousand swords.

Your loosing me a phone call at a time,
I'm ready to give up ever calling you 'mine'.
Don't you see, my love is diminishing at a fast rate.
OMG won't you open your eyes for heavens sake! ! !

I let myself believe in you… are you a never ending lie?
But in the end I'm not going to be the one to cry.

One day after I can't take it anymore and leave, you'll see.
I've never needed a man to complete me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Con Nie 08 March 2008

I love the last line on this. Good expression of feelings. Sincerely, Connie Webb

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Patricia Bankhead 17 July 2007

I know the pain that relationships can bring. If I knew then what I know now I would have moved on. I've learned you can't make others love you but there is always somebody that does. Enjoyed reading. God bless you. He loves you and so do I.

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Who's Erwhatsit 14 July 2007

Nice rhymes, painful subject. Emotions well said.

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Coreena Dejesus

Coreena Dejesus

USA (Born in MA) (Raised in MI)
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