Vicious Poem by Vanessa Kingsley

Vicious

Rating: 5.0


Though the mood is calm
Electricity swirls through the air
Emotions catch on flame
The anger’s ignited
Vibrant colors can be seen
Such a vicious cycle
How can no one hear them scream?
One is torn in two
Her heart lost in woe
The other oddly aggravated
Tired of it all
Tensions will rise again
The fire simmers down
Friends no longer to the other
But enemies till the bitter end

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dans Only 28 April 2009

I loved how this poem flowed. Easily read. Each line seemed to stand on it's own. Yet when read as a whole, it takes you on an emotional journey. Fantastic write.

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Vanessa Kingsley

Vanessa Kingsley

Colorado Springs, Colorado
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