Wednesday, February 22, 2012

Vignette Comments

Rating: 5.0

The mountains covered in snow, are the focal point.
A sea of yellowish green creosote mark the land,
With scattered stands of cholla, in different shapes and sizes.
The land appears hilly and the rises and falls,
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Juan Olivarez
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Claudia Krizay 23 February 2012

Extremely well done, Juan! Very vivid imagery- I can almost see it! Anditi s a beautiful scene to see! !

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 22 February 2012

The view as majestic and as awesome as the Creator, while this poem is as sensitive and receptive to nature as the poet who wrote it. Beautiful scenery!

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Eric Cockrell 22 February 2012

the hand of the spirit at work! great poem!

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