Villanelle Comments
I have lost my turtle-dove:
Is she not the one I hear
I must go and find my love.
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Very nicely done, Tom. You have certainly captured here the universally resonating poignancy of loss, the haunting tenacity of which likely contributed to the endurance of this poetic form. Thank you for sharing this artistically executed translation; in my eyes you have done it great justice.
I think the line that ends treasure trove might need revising. French is easier to rhyme than English. And I couldn't think of a way of bringing in that ringing bell sound that the poet uses from Tourterelle. the French for Turtle-dove. The original is very beautiful.
Tom this is so sad yet beautiful at the same time, to find my turtle-dove, don't think I have ever really found mine...YET...there is always time.....I hope lol Annette
I'm sure you will, Annette. In fact I know you will. keep flashing those Irish eyes!
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12/12/2025 1:08:49 PM # 1.0.0
Oh! This is such a heart-breaking poem... and really it seemed straight from your heart, Tom. Thank you for translating it into English- -it is one of those important ones that I could not have read if you hadn't. Bless you.. You have challenged me- -I shall try to write a Villanelle- -so be ready to duck! ! !
I shall try to write an original myself. The original French sounds so musical. And the repeatedell sounds like a funeral bell which intensifies the feeling. As I said below Tourterelle is the French for Turtle-dove. He uses three beats to the line but there is no reason why you shouldn't write it to suit your own rhythm. I'll look forward to reading it.