Monday, October 25, 2004

Violets Comments

Rating: 2.3

When I was a child
My mother took me
To look for violets.
They grew in a secret place
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Pete Crowther
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John Tiong Chunghoo 13 August 2005

crowther, short but lovely.

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A. B. 26 May 2005

Actually Mac, i think the line it was long ago adds beauty to the poem.

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Mac Wilkey 23 February 2005

I love it, but I don't think the last line adds anything-it's evident that it must have been long ago. Why not just dropp it?

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Pete Crowther

Pete Crowther

Hull, East Yorkshire, England
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