Wednesday, August 29, 2012

Virgin Mermaid Undertones, Portrait Poems Comments

Rating: 3.3

Charmed by sea beds peaceful dive;
iridium skin, moist wishful eyes,
storm above deep calm below
virgin mermaid undertones.
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The Reader 30 August 2012

Graphic description, by harmonic, melodic, or rhythmic means, of the words of a text or the story elements in program music is called word-painting...and the word-class substitutes the colors to paint the portrait here... it really IS a portrait poem...

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Mark Dillon 30 August 2012

She breaches on the port side, great description, nice one captain.

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Valerie Dohren 30 August 2012

This must be a beautiful portrait - love the theme.

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