Thursday, June 21, 2018

Visiting Sparrows Comments

Rating: 5.0

Coineau, coineau,
sparrow.. sparrow
my life's a flutter
with yournature
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Tom Billsborough
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Bri Edwards 13 July 2018

i'm in a hurry! last two lines my favorite, as are ALL birds, especially chicken and turkey..........on a platter. bri :)

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Kelly Kurt 21 June 2018

Sparrows delight me as well. A beautiful write.

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Anna Aitken 21 June 2018

Tom another wonderful poem no wonder sad moronic losers are so envious of you and your talents.

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tom billsborough 21 June 2018

thanks geoffrey and Robert. I'm off to Scotland soon. Maybe I should show the laughably named Truth the truth about my wife's death, assuming of course the Blathering twit can read a thing as complex as a death certificate. What about it, Judy babyt?

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Geoffrey Fafard 21 June 2018

This poem is pure delight in its simplicity...wonderful in its happiness..... Thank you Tom. Cheers Geoffrey.

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The Crow 21 June 2018

Old man you should die

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Robert Murray Smith 21 June 2018

A wonderful poem Tom.++10 Regards Robert

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The Truth 21 June 2018

We all know what you do with boys

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Tom Billsborough

Tom Billsborough

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