Vortex Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Vortex

Rating: 5.0


Spinning.
Choosing to free myself.
Lose my appetite to fight,
As a birthright...
That excite ambitions to battle.
Whether they are depicted
To be wrong or right.

There is a complex series,
Of a vortex set and spinning within!
I want them to spin rapidly without end!
To claim enchantment as my enhancement...
As each day begins!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Scarlett Treat 27 October 2007

Circles within circles, spiral, vortexes.... Spinning out of control.... Leaving us dizzy... And, like a child, Spinning in circles in the park, Begging for more! !

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