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I had walked since dawn and lay down to rest on a bare hillside
Above the ocean. I saw through half-shut eyelids a vulture wheeling
high up in heaven,
And presently it passed again, but lower and nearer, its orbit
I understood then
That I was under inspection. I lay death-still and heard the flight-
Whistle above me and make their circle and come nearer.
I could see the naked red head between the great wings

Bear downward staring. I said, 'My dear bird, we are wasting time
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Fabrizio Frosini 10 December 2015

A description about the cycles of nature...

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Darryl Jackson 26 June 2015

The beauty of the circle of life is clear in these words.

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Kim Barney 01 December 2014

Amazing. I was intrigued from the beginning, because I love to watch vultures flying, but then the abrupt thought of becoming part of one by being eaten, that just blew me away!

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Seamus O Brian 01 December 2014

I had my doubts at the beginning, but the imagery pulled me in and nailed me.

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Frank Avon 31 August 2014

Incredibly good poem on a subject that one would not expect. The poet's vision transforms the reader's vision seamlessly. I wish I could see how the poem actually looks on a page; this would help me know how to read it orally.

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Michael Walker 31 July 2019

He is ambivalent about the vulture-love-hate. He is afraid of the vulture killing him, but admires the bird's beauty, his wings 'those great sails' and he thinks this would be a good a way as any to die.

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MS.CLHH 05 December 2018

A very respectful ode to vulture. I will frame it and hang it beside my vulture painting.

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MUHAMMAD JANGO 28 November 2018

The poem is really amazing and of metaphysical images.

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Janet Briggs 15 September 2017

Here's a good video reading of this poem: https: //youtu.be/fbEJzWi-hA8

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Fabrizio Frosini 10 December 2015

''What a sublime end of one's body, '' well.. not the best, maybe.. ;) - In Italian: - ''Quale sublime fine per il proprio corpo, ''

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