Vultures Be Gone Poem by Justin Henry

Vultures Be Gone



Strip the flesh off the bone
pull it off, pull it off! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
A tug of war, tearing at your face.
They fly in circle, and sweep in for the kill
I yell 'Vultures be Gone', but they still
consume the corpses, piece by piece they are destroyed.
Watching is tearing at my soul,
watching them swarm across the battlefield.
Am I alive, or am I dead?
I don't know.
Covered in dry blood, my vision in red haze
as my eyes are being clawed out..
I'm lying on the ground, dazed and confused
yet there is little doubt I'm trapped within a maze.
'Vultures be Gone'
You cut a hole passed my sternum
and steal the soul from my chest.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amber Glistener 18 March 2012

oh my lord you've done it!

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Greenwolfe 1962 30 June 2008

This one is more clear, but I see so much missing that I can't fully enjoy the poem or prose as it is. Itis a good creative idea but it needs to be developed more. GW62

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Shaun William Hayes 05 May 2008

another powerful piece, are you truly 15 or 16, if so you write with great animism, keep it up.

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