Waiting For The Rain Comments

To play with my brother, To splash water at his face, To stop the outlet of the water, To collect water on our roof, To ride my bicycle, To jump into potholes, To watch the topless children, Running through the street, To make paper boats, .. just just loved the lines.. such a lively poem.. what i can say is one the best i have read.. no protocols.. bas maja aa gaya..bachpan taaza ho gaya..u rocked.. 10++

The rain picture runs like a movie with every minor details woven in and around that scene.

beautiful poem. nicely portrayed. simple facts. simple words. simple structure. simple contents. yet the overall simplicity is lovely.10

'Awaiting the arrival of its final redemption' Rachel Ann Butler

a severe summer explained with good imagery.nice poem voted10 surya

lovely elaborative eloquent piece...................great theme!