Waiting Room Poem by Anna Banasiak

Waiting Room

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I got tangled
in time
I'm lost
in the chaos
of things postponed for later
thoughts are silent
life goes on too fast
in the compartments
I'm confused by the turn of things


death deletes tickets

searching for me
in the waiting room of life

Thursday, May 14, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 15 June 2020

" I'm confused by the turn of things." That's the theme of this poem. But you've paused to give some thought to your situation. Time is a mean trickster: sometimes to goes too fast, sometimes too slow. You fear the steady approach of death, but the waiting room is a tedious place to be. A poem like those can liberate you: you realize your mind is active, it still grasps the nature of life. Your mind conquers reality. At least, there is that possibility.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 14 May 2020

A well composed poem. Simply exceptional........10++👌

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Jazib Kamalvi 14 May 2020

Such a nice poem, Anna Banasiak. Read my poem, Love and L u s t. Thanks.

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