Md. Asadullah

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Wake Up! - Poem by Md. Asadullah

Wake up! slumbering eyes.
Engulfed in darkness of night.
Wake up! just open your eyes.
I'll show you dream in daylight.

Try and look as far as you can.
Very far beyond the starry sea.
But if vision is entangled 'tween.
Just close your eyes and see.

Try and see far beyond stars.
Dive deep in dream, a 'delusion'.
Who knows dream may be real.
And reality just an illusion.

Topic(s) of this poem: awakening


Comments about Wake Up! by Md. Asadullah

  • (11/10/2014 8:00:00 AM)

    Nice poem (Report)Reply

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  • Heather Wilkins (10/8/2014 7:01:00 PM)

    try and see beyond the stars who knows dream may be real and reality just an illusion (Report)Reply

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  • Akhtar Jawad (9/28/2014 10:11:00 AM)

    Dreams are dreams, for a common man like if is true it's a game of probability. However, dreams of prophets are always true. (Report)Reply

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  • Musfiq Us Shaleheen (9/24/2014 2:30:00 AM)

    @ Valsa George and @ Aftab Alam truly said.........
    beautiful write bhai.....
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  • Valsa George (9/22/2014 4:47:00 AM)

    Sometimes dreams can be real and reality- an illusion! What a strange paradox! Indeed a profound write! (Report)Reply

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  • Aftab Alam Khursheed (9/21/2014 9:12:00 AM)

    A call to awake..Its duty to awake the people if they don't it is upto them a peot has done his duty very nice bhai (Report)Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (9/21/2014 2:03:00 AM)

    Wake up, try and look far as you can, try and see far beyond stars. Really a great work with great feeling. Nice on sharing. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 21, 2014

Poem Edited: Sunday, September 21, 2014


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