Wake Up Young Souls Poem by Rakhi Jayashankar

Wake Up Young Souls

Rating: 4.5


In a contemplative mood
My mind flew
To some unknown strata of cerebral hemisphere
Tapping the brains
Trying to peel off the hidden layers
A new picture divulged

A soul sublimed in insanity of the fumes inhaled
Defining a new realm of motion
In the dreadful thump
Devils dancing in the hell
Celebrating the victory
' Yes! ! ! ! One more life
Searching for rapturous delight
Came to the web
We waited for so long
interlacing the folk
For the puerile teens
Like a spider weaving the web and waiting for the prey'

Yet another victory for the satanic powers
Why u fools lay your heads, comply your life
To the disaster for nothing but momentary pleasure

Disgusted with the recurring follies
I pray to the youth
Wake up! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
To see the truth
To perceive the danger
To procure the freedom
Act for your future
Wake up
Wake up

Sunday, February 8, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: social comment
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Recently a growing actor and some known models got arrested with. cocaine
End of a career and life for them
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 18 April 2015

Very nicely and deeply envisioned. Groovy collocation. Many thanks......10

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 01 April 2015

Great write.Inspiring one indeed

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Akhtar Jawad 01 April 2015

A thoughtful poem having a great message...................10

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Babatunde Aremu 11 February 2015

Great write! its a food for thought for the youths. They need to wake up to reality. Kudos

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