Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 799,989 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Walk Alone - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Walk alone

Even if you repeat lines hundred times
Life and age may not stop sometimes
It has to move on and on
Whether it is lot or won

What is not good if you walk alone?
It is not going to devastate like cyclone
You cans till bear a good smile
Life is thrilling as such meanwhile

Many may be blessed with children
But that can’t be considered as exception even
But if not blessed with full of family
Take it as blessings from almighty

If time was commodity to purchase
We could have made successful chase
One grows old with passage of time
Neither it’s curse not a crime

What even if you have to walk along?
If something is going wrong
One must face it bravely and surge ahead
Life is to be lived with providing lead

No one can arrest the time
It is unstoppable all the times
No has done it so and may do it in future
One must learn how to live it happily for sure

No one would want to grow old
Wish to remain ever green and bold
May collect through out life precious stones and gold
Would never want to leave and live without fold


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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/6/2011 11:12:00 PM)

    Kavitha Rani Great Poem Hasmukh Amathalal Ji. We all slaves of time..When time is passing by like a king, sometimes it gives a new one..or else snatches away something else from us.but never stops its journey or waits to listen to our cry.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/6/2011 9:49:00 AM)

    Deepak Deopa beautiful.we mortals are short lived but time's journey is eternal n never ending
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    Perugu Sujanaram nice poem
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    Hasmukh Amathalal The first stanza itself tells the whole. Thanks.

    RM Shanmugam chettiar, Chennai
    Oct 06,2011

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    Dear Mr. Mehta, The last stanza is enlightening. Men observe around them how the collectors of gold and stones meet their end but hardly learn anything.

    The poems published in this site remind me of Max Muller's observation on the Rigveda - 'Full of scrap with a few sparkling jewels here and there.' We do not get sparkling jewels very easily. They are to be discovered with great effort.

    Go ahead Mr. Mehta, and continue to instruct us with your experience and learning.

    K H Prabhu, Kumta (Uttara Kannada) Karnataka - 581343
    Oct 06,2011
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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/5/2011 8:41:00 PM)

    Great advice and a nice philosophical write...thanks for sharing! on Walk alone
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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/5/2011 9:53:00 AM)

    Panigrahi Sudam Good.20 minutes ago · Like Dalvir Singh Gahlawat yea sir it is instructive one, Time can not be stopped by the incident whatever it is! Either -Birth or Death 6 mi (Report)Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/5/2011 9:52:00 AM)

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    Dalvir Singh Gahlawat yea sir it is instructive one, Time can not be stopped by the incident whatever it is! Either -Birth or Death 6 mi
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 5, 2011



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