Walk Beside Me A While Poem by Rani Turton

Walk Beside Me A While

Rating: 5.0


Walk beside me a while, let me feel
Your presence; your absence surreal,
Often present; the lack of a presence
Now has past: the past, though is still present.
Bemused, my thoughts often take flight.

Walk beside me a while, I will see
Your lenghtening shadow melt into mine
The air we breathe fragrant with sweet delight:
We can speak and smile or sulk or sigh
The clouds will look down and sail right on by.

Walk beside me, let me feel again
The presence without the pain
Now that's what I call melancholic delight
You, your presence, your shadow, your voice
Befuddle my definitions of wrong and right.

Walk beside me, for a while, do
You can, you could and you surely can
Grant what I've asked you for so long
Just to make another memory or to write
These paltry lines into another paltry song.

Copyright: Rani Turton

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

The repetition of the title works really well to give your beautiful imagery substance. A really fine poem Rani.

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C. P. Sharma 25 February 2009

written from heart on the convass of the soul. CP

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Kesav Easwaran 20 February 2009

sadness despair and hope all explode together on those heavy last stanza lines...the mind tries hard to re-paint memories once sweet...colorless on an empty reflective canvas...good poem, Rani...10

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Kevin Wells 18 February 2009

Absolutely beautiful, Rani. I love the sentiments and the imagery.

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Kris Smith 12 February 2009

Your pen always amazes me Rani such a beautiful flow to this poem 10 ++++ Chris

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