Wednesday, November 7, 2018

Walking The Long Walk Comments

Rating: 5.0

A hungry baby
sucks from the breast
another child
holds tightly
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Dorsey Baker
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Bernard F. Asuncion 08 November 2018

Dorsey, such a well penned poem....10+++++++++++

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Practicing Poetess 07 November 2018

Although you didn't specifically mention it, this sounds like the Caravan, Dorsey. I hope she doesn't turn out to be one of those who, in utter exhaustion, calls for a bus to take her back home.

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