Theodora (Theo) Onken

Gold Star - 25,249 Points (Washington State)

Warning''s 1 - Poem by Theodora (Theo) Onken

The Darkness
Holds close
It's secret
At the concrete
Much too near
The drive way
Of one of
God's many abode's

By, Theodora Onken

January 16,2016

Topic(s) of this poem: evil

Form: Blank Verse

Poet's Notes about The Poem

...of the criminal mind and their supposed hidden agenda's
with it's final exposure to the 'Light'.
Also, about blocks put on computer's by two people now identified.

Comments about Warning''s 1 by Theodora (Theo) Onken

  • (6/7/2016 11:11:00 PM)

    Wonder if Emily and Michael know that we know what was really behind the un-invited home invasion by their 6' foot black male friend with the dread locks into our home on Sunday - June 5,2016 at 3: 15 PM.? He drove up in his Red Scion TC and sat in front of our home for at least 5 minutes before getting up the nerve to enter our home(entry hall) listening to me call out to my husband who i thought had returned from a golf game. After my 3rd call out to Gary, heard my front door open and slam shut. i got out of bed just in time to see him pulling away. When husband got home- we called our son over as well. We reviewed the tape and saw where he went next door...where he may have spent about 30 seconds-then ran to his car and left. Son went next door and got a far-fetched explanation - none of which my husband, law enforcement or i are buying. We are just going to sit on this and wait for their next attempt. We believe that they may have been acting on orders from perhaps another state- one up north. Time and digging will tell on this one. (Report) Reply

    (4/26/2017 7:21:00 PM)

    Emily and Michael just up and moved out withing 3-4 weeks of this action; they moved during the 4th of July weekend. Having lived there one month of their years lease. Believe they felt uncomfortable after they got caught. The family that lived there previously lasted two years and when they left - they left in an RV with no place in mind accept to tour the lower part of Texas, New Mexico, AZ, California. They were linked to the illegal drug trade in this little town. This home next door became a rental in the Spring of 2013 and so far - everyone who has moved in has REALLY STOOD OUT! ! ! !

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  • (6/5/2016 6:23:00 PM)

    She is just a very small young woman with short brown hair; she lives next door. She is very good at coming up with an explanation - that after talking about it- between ourselves and with the law enforcement-and what actually happened-WE ALL KNOW BETTER Am reminded of the bible saying To love our neighbors as we love ourselves Well, in this day and age, it doesn't always apply. i do, however, thank God for our many good neighbors, everyday. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 16, 2016

Poem Edited: Saturday, January 16, 2016

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