Monday, April 23, 2007

Wash Your Own Plate Comments

Rating: 5.0

Too little
Too late
The heat of it has gone.
The passion and desire...
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Sid John Gardner. 27 April 2007

Well written Lawrence. Sid John.

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Ernestine Northover 24 April 2007

Great title Lawrence, very well described and a most enjoyable read. Great ending.

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Francesca Johnson 24 April 2007

A gritty piece of writing, Lawrence. I like the way this has been set out and the last two lines say it all. Well done. Love, Fran xxx

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Delilah Miller 24 April 2007

I've been reading your material allll night and I'm floored by it. This poem especially; I always seem to run out of affection before the meal ends. Hope you're having a great night Xs and Os

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

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