Too little
Too late
The heat of it has gone.
The passion and desire...
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Great title Lawrence, very well described and a most enjoyable read. Great ending.
A gritty piece of writing, Lawrence. I like the way this has been set out and the last two lines say it all. Well done. Love, Fran xxx
I've been reading your material allll night and I'm floored by it. This poem especially; I always seem to run out of affection before the meal ends. Hope you're having a great night Xs and Os
Well written Lawrence. Sid John.