Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 436,908 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Watch Future Generation - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

It is thrilling to watch future generation
More or so with your own grandsons
What hope you have in them for future?
You may enjoy it quietly for sure

Some may be crawling on ground
Some may be crying with lots of noise and sound
But it makes altogether presentable round
The happiness and joy is certainly found

One of my friend I has named as cuckoo
She is kind but has proved me a Waterloo
The decisive battle was fought on this famous battle field
It proved graveyard and rivals put stiff resistaqnce and held

She is little aggressive in approach
As teacher she is nice but not as good coach
She will not allow single deviation
This sometimes strains the relation

I teased her by calling granny
I may call her sometimes oldie
Now she has become grandmother
What else to compliment or offer

Today she came on line
Was in good mood and feeling fine
I did convey our best wishes
But she had to make move and sometimes rush

No one can measure level of joy
It is exciting stage and only self can enjoy
It may release happiness counts and ripples
Feet may take longer steps with disregard of pulses

This stage must come in everybody’s life at least once
Even though it can be imagined as life time chance
Not all may be blessed with or find it with fine health
Even though he or she may be having plenty of wealth

She did not stay long to spell more on family
She was enjoying every moment very happily
What else you need in later stage of life span?
When actually you had never thought over with any of the plan

Comments about Watch Future Generation by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/22/2011 8:16:00 PM)

    ♬ ♪ ∫ ค ร к ใ ค ر ا ..
    as allways tell to u, well done my indian Shakespeare

    ☮ Г •д •Г •д •❤ _
    v nice, , , thanksss
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/22/2011 9:44:00 AM)

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    ❤ ♫ ❤ Amarela❤ ♫ ❤
    What else you need in later stage of life span? >>>>oh...in later: stage: i enjoyed more things than be only a grandmother...ha ha.very nice my friend.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/22/2011 2:42:00 AM)

    Naidz Ladia owwwwwwwwwww my gosh oldy.....ur poem is very nice.... hope everything will be fine today and to the next days in the future i may laugh with wrinkles but my heart is still kind to all friends in work...hope everybody is fine... Yesterday at 2: 39am · Like
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/22/2011 2:42:00 AM)

    Gloria Rodikis Oh I loved this poem...it was dancing with your 'granny friend! '...lol
    2 hours ago · Like
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 19, 2011

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