Watch It Happily Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Watch It Happily

Rating: 5.0


I wished it to happen
Not all of sudden
But on notes
Passionately to relate

Yes it was desire
So much scope to admire
As you stood different
Very much active at present

You were holding back
That beautiful smile on jack
I wondered what use it had!
You were really confused lad

You have identity
That has been blessed by almighty
Enjoy it independently
And think of it suitably

You certainly present real earth
With full of love and warmth
You are embodiment of love
I hold views and believe

You may have some wishes
Let that find fine finish
I can only stand at distance
Watch it happily by chance

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 October 2013

Good read. darran hardwick18 minutes ago Very enjoyable poem to read. Just one thing I noticed, a typo in the title word Happlily should read happily. Well done. D.H.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 October 2013

random review Chloe MoonLess than a minute ago slightly confusing, but waltzy and fun to read

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 October 2013

I wished it to happen Not all of sudden

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