Watching Poem by Mary Mc Creath

Watching



Watching life go bye
A moot point
flying around
Condenses here in space time
Hear the happy bird singing
Take a bow forever

Wednesday, September 30, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: thinking
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Meditation
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 15 October 2015

When we see the inevitability, that this beautiful life is surely flying away, it is a feeling of sadness that takes us over.Life's philosophy expressed through this short and beautiful poem

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Seema Jayaraman 13 October 2015

Watching life go bye A moot point flying around Condenses here in space time I noticed your use of bye in this line, with heavy sad feeling, yes life and the years are passing by...though we wish there was some way to hold the precious beautiful moments and live in them forever. Thanks for sharing.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 30 September 2015

Short and sweet song of life. I liked it.

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Mary Mc Creath

Mary Mc Creath

Glasgow, Scotland
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