Watered Down Poem by Carsten Thomsen

Watered Down

Rating: 5.0


Watered down with bourbon
and ice
to lukewarm
acceptable feelings
Flushed down
and out
with
YOUR
birthday
and phone number
Your problems at work
The names of your
male-good-friends
and other things
I need no longer
need
like your spare toothbrush
or smiling picture
on my refrigerator
door

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Victoria Gauci 01 August 2012

Direct and to the point. Maybe it's time to remove those things. I love your work.

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Dave Walker 12 February 2012

Really great poem, like it, a great write.

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