We Are Stringed Poem by Narayanan Nair. P Perunthanam

We Are Stringed



1
Like a crane knee deep
Meditating, I thought deep
On Muse’s blessing.
2
As gold grains sprinkled
Around me at the Centre
Beamed Divine Sun.
3
Deeper and deeper
My breath soft and soft the pulse
Soul with soul merged.
4
No body nobody
Emerald green passed blue
Bright White God in me.
5
God Particle saw
See, will see: my Protector
Almighty Creator.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A stringed haikus; Crane catches It
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aftab Alam Khursheed 18 August 2013

Drop by drop you created the thirst on me very good poem NAsar well write

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Dinesan Madathil 04 July 2013

I enjoyed the concept. What I cannot understand is in this large world of millions of living beings living in misery and innumerable disasters why we search for ' my God' instead of ' our God' who has to take care of all on massive relief operation. The God in the perishing life unnoticed, we talk about the God in the surviving life. But how long sir? According to the scientific probabilities related to the future of things ahead, please note that our earth will be minus human beings by AD 3200 because of the disastrous climatic and environmental reverses and there will be life for the creatures that may tune to the new life in water and under the earth. But will any of them have enough brains to invent a God who can be called' our protector'? Take it light sir.

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Gajanan Mishra 30 June 2013

almighty creator, good write, thanks.

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