We Be In Deep Doo Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

It takes more time than one would think,
To find words to have them link and sink...
Into a mind confined and fenced,
Behind convincing limitation.
With intent to broaden imagination.

And sometimes the doing of it is subjected to fail.
When a purpose is to deliver,
An observation on the surface to affect a thought process.
With words basic that are found and picked,
To avoid the use of excess that can lose a connection quick.

People seek to be led and fed with an ease that is chewed.
And with an image to digest,
Without a prolonged repeating of a thought process.
This causes confusion.
And a thought that confuses many can't and wont accept.

People seek everyday a more ease of life.
And keeping it as simple as possible is not easy to do.
Many writers spend several sleepless nights,
Doing the best they can to find the right words to entice...
To keep simplicity to depict a picture without a thousands words.

'Okay.
Let me say this another way.
Perhaps I haven't been more direct.
There aren't too many words left from which I can select.
But,
How's this...?
We Be In Deep Doo.
Can you feel me now? '

~I'm sorry.
I don't follow you at all.
Can you try being 'less' lofty?
And 'more' specific with your depictions.
Remember...
Comprehension is the key,
To opening doors to communicate an understanding,
If the doing is going to be successful.~