We Create The Universe~~~ Poem by Chuy Amante

We Create The Universe~~~

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We've created ALL we see 'out there'
If our consciousness stopped, all would be gone

Each one of us creates the Universe we see

If we both create a blue cold planet
can we just share the same one?

How about sad people? Happy ones?
famine and fun? Euphoria?

How about if a few million of us
create a Pacific Ocean and a California?
Can we share one creation of it?

See who creates and create at will
only God's will can be done

Tuesday, October 21, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 22 October 2014

What exists in reality and what does not. what is only a figment of our imagination or consciousness. Is that the question, Mr. Poet? Very deep thoughts are in this poem of what really is and what is not. Not to be taken lightly but to be read many times to be able to fathom its profundity and beauty.The poet know what the poet knows and it is our job to understand it.

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