Thursday, March 30, 2023

We Flowers Of The Sun Comments

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The tiny bird
comes to peck patiently
at one sunflower seed.
Pausing briefly to ponder the sky,
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Smoky Hoss
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Kim Barney 03 April 2023

Enjoyed reading this. Smoky, I always knew that you were a flower child!

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Denis Mair 03 April 2023

Sipping coffee gives you time to gather impressions, to put yourself into the landscape with the heliotropes and seed-gatherers. Nice vibe.

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Jayne Louise Davies 03 April 2023

What a wonderful poem x Loved reading it x

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 03 April 2023

Smoky this is brilliant especially how you described drinking coffee Encore! ! ! !

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M.J. Lemon 03 April 2023

Brilliant! This verse takes back about six summers to a day when a hummingbird visited me on the back porch. Our sunfllower took the place of one beanstalk in the garden by the garage....

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