Weak Wings Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Weak Wings

Rating: 5.0


Freedom only feet away
Birds could not fly
Wings so weak

We could see helplessness
In her eyes
Desperate try

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 September 2013

Freedom only feet away Birds could not fly Wings so weak

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 September 2013

sad but good CherisseandJustin Scott5 minutes ago Beautifully done

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 September 2013

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 September 2013

beautiful Jet Rood7 minutes ago its like a metaphor. Many people stand in life like this; because of the system they cannot fly with their true souls or just with one wing what is not possible. thanks for sharing

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 September 2013

keaobaka mmmhhhh, sad

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 September 2013

radhana verma wonderful sirrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 September 2013

rajen palan Desperate try. Wonderful

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 September 2013

« Delete » DEVKISHAN MEH.. NICE

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 September 2013

Sana Shahid Very nice...Wonderful lines! ! !

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 September 2013

P() () j@, We could see helplessness In her eyes Desperate try, ITS WONDERFUL

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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