Welcome Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Welcome

Rating: 5.0


“Dear wake up and get ready”
You are air borne and heavenly abode
No use of your staying here and spoiling others
God has specially sent us to pick you up as HE bothers

You have done enough disservice to mankind
Among self centered people, you were only little kind
We searched many eligible but could not find
Would you come along with us if you don’t mind?

I couldn’t believe the words as there was no reality
I was never kind but ruthless and adopted cruelty
Conceded the point that there may be some error
I thought of seeing self once more in mirror

God may have his own way of tackling the issues
Springing the surprise and offering the dues
I thought I might be the first person to get the invitation
Chest just broadened up with joy and excitation

Lavish treatment and extravagance at disposal
Not bad, but very good I thought was a proposal
Waited eagerly for anxious moments to realize
Remembered all incidences of life and summarize

Soon I sensed some trouble and gamble
Many people were standing and in shamble
I too would be just one of them and standing
I should have refused, escaped and evaded

I was ushered in with all the respect
I had enough time to see and inspect
May be some special occasion together and call
Greet them and …………….

You have done enough damage and harm
Your relation with all were hostile and not warm
You never thought of helping the poor
Confined to self and shut the door

You were shame on humanity
There was no use of your continuity
So you are called here with special mission
Call for all your misacts and admissions

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
K.v. Subbarao 01 October 2009

couldn’t believe the words as there was no reality I was never kind but ruthless and adopted cruelty Conceded the point that there may be some error

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Venkat Ramanna 01 October 2009

“Dear wake up and get ready” You are air borne and heavenly abode No use of your staying here and spoiling others

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Sunita Rao 01 October 2009

couldn’t believe the words as there was no reality I was never kind but ruthless and adopted cruelty

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Nagesh Ratnavelu 01 October 2009

God may have his own way of tackling the issues Springing the surprise and offering the dues I thought I might be the first person to get the

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Severina Dsouza 01 October 2009

couldn’t believe the words as there was no reality I was never kind but ruthless and adopted cruelty Conceded the point that there may be some error

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Adrianne Colton 23 November 2009

Conceded the point that there may be some error I thought of seeing self once more in mirror 10

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Nathanial Jones 04 November 2009

Very talented word play once again...8/10

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Marieta Maglas 03 November 2009

You were shame on humanity There was no use of your continuity So you are called here with special mission Call for all your misacts and admissions excellent written..a masterpiece..thank you for sharing 10++++++++++

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Lalvani Rekha 09 October 2009

“Dear wake up and get ready” You are air borne and heavenly abode

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AtreyaSarma Uppaluri 08 October 2009

Tempting address, novel treatment, beautiful composition, smooth flow, good rhyme. For all our misdeeds we may delude ourselves, we may delude others…but we can’t delude God…at Whose hands we are sure to be meted out our deserts.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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