Welcomed Gallows Poem by Bryan Taplits

Welcomed Gallows

Rating: 5.0


A cloud came out, the sun went in
More drizzle was my life
I prayed then hoped-but just got rope-
My heart: All slice and diced!
My memories both spun and tied-
I thought you were to blame-
But still I sigh-
My heart a hangman's noose-
Yes, I love you just the same.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

A forceful short poem. But the revelation at the close is " My heart a hangman's noose- Yes, I love you just the same"… great! Loved it.

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Bryan Taplits 14 June 2022

Thank you for your very kind analysis-and words. I appreciate the feedback. Take care.

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