Monday, September 4, 2023

What A Milkshake! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Under the clear sky where moon was shining so bright
my wife offered me a milkshake and my thoughts got delight
now there sat a poet in me with a grin
Sippin' on a milkshake from within
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M. Asim Nehal
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Sheeya Hacks 16 September 2023

Ha ha ha... LOL this is really a good humorous poem, you made my day.

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Michael Jack 07 September 2023

All from your imagination. Nice work.

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Bharati Nayak 05 September 2023

A nice funny poem! It is different from your usual stuff and shows more maturity and more versatility as a poet.Greatly enjoyed the milkshake and hope such poem comes from me too.

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Nabakishore Dash 05 September 2023

A very thought provoking milkshake really.

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Poetic Sky 04 September 2023

My milkshake is shaking in hand and I gulp it with ice and creams.

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