What Are You? ? Poem by Neha Aradhye

What Are You? ?

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when i was in the place of dark,
u guided me wit a ray of light...
u sprinkled onto me with golden marks,
& made it cloudless, just out of sight...

u wrapped up the frightning storm,
& cleared up & made everything so uniform! ! ! !
you're so tempting...like a chocolate,
you're my romeo & i'm ur juliet...
You make my universe uncertainly bloomy,
but sometimes, u make me go insane like whisky...
you broadened my vista,
& gave me a new, bracing alpha,
you symbolize peace, love & lima...

you're a sunlight from heaven,
you're a memory of splashing stream...
you're far better than a billion,
you're a classical theme....

The negativity in my mind,
The spotless side inside,
The unknown part of a kind,
All the things intertwined.....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
anurag duggal 15 April 2009

i like the whisky waala line very creative...always try using unconventional words in ur poems makes it very interesting.... :))

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Dhanesh Aradhye 15 April 2009

ya.. seems lyk lyrics.. vista, alpha huh.. cool words yaar.. liked it lot..

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