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You Are Astounding! ! ! ! ! !

Rating: 5.0
I just want to feel your presence,
I wanna see that incontrovertible innocence..

in your eyes that makes me so COMPLETE,
& your dainty-benevolent touch synthesize in me, a musical beat,
rhythmical, harmonious & sweet,
and that's the reason why you exist in my every heartbeat....

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Kaushik C 16 December 2008
The Word COMPLETE has got a lot of meanings...great work chap...
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Geeta Nair 12 December 2008
Dear Neha, Outstanding I would say for You are astounding, , , , Short & sweet....loved very much...keep it up dear! ! -geets
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Sarvesh Kulkarni 09 December 2008
wow...he certainly must be astounding..... wonderfully expressed friend, khup avadlee tujhi poem, thanks
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Gargi Saha 09 December 2008
a WONDERFUL romantic poem. u get 10++.........
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Wayne Peterson 03 December 2008
I really like your poem!
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Kesav Easwaran 03 December 2008
astounding heart beat...can hear its symphony, sweet...expressive lovely write, Neha...10
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Sathyanarayana M V S 03 December 2008
Really a heart felt expression. did well.
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Lynda Robson 03 December 2008
A heartfelt poem, written with love, 10 Lynda xx
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Reshma Ramesh 02 December 2008
lovely love poem.....well penned
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Dhanesh Aradhye 02 December 2008
Neha... u write so amazingly impressive, with simplicity of words and rhythmic lines.. this one is so musical dat even your reference to ur heartbeats seems like some music.
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