Saturday, September 2, 2017
What Falls First Comments
Rating: ★4.8
You fell into my tiny universe
My water globe of wishfulness
Much the way snow cascades
From the winter sky
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Mario, Lucien, Rene Odekerken
02 September 2017
Beautiful poem Susan Thank you for sharing Mario Odekerken
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Anita Aparajita Das
02 September 2017
Coating my landscape In brilliant breathtaking beauty A pristine path where no footsteps Had yet broken or breached the stillness Nice lines dear poet..keep it up. 10++
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12/19/2025 5:14:21 AM # 1.0.0
I enjoyed reading this poem. A wonderful write, thanks for sharing.