Saturday, August 1, 2015

What I Would Not Give Comments

Rating: 4.4

For one more morning with my bride
And to wake up by her side
She to be before my eyes
While we lay as the sun rise
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Eduardo Santibanez
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Chinedu Dike 12 August 2015

Beautifully penned love poem with nice rhyme scheme. A well articulated piece of poetry from the heart. Thanks for sharing Eduardo. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Roseann Shawiak 03 August 2015

Touched my heart with this beautiful poem Eduardo! You speak so tenderly and quietly of such a deep and abiding love. An eloquent rendering of your love, thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

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Eduardo Santibanez 04 August 2015

Thank you for your comment. I appreciate it

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Kelly Kurt 02 August 2015

A lovely poem, Eduardo. Thanks

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Eduardo Santibanez 04 August 2015

Thanks to you for your comment and for reading

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Allotey Abossey 02 August 2015

Love is a beautiful thing, so is your poem... Good work

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Eduardo Santibanez 04 August 2015

Thanks, love indeed is beautiful, love is pure, but sadly we are the ones who corrupt it and turn it into pain and suffering.

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