What Is It Together Are We Wishing The Other To Be? Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

What Is It Together Are We Wishing The Other To Be?

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If it isn't about me
Nor is this about you...
Then what on Earth are we attracted to?

If I like what I see...
And you say the same of me,
Then what is it together
Are we really seeking?

You say I don't listen,
To your scattered conversations.
I want to understand...
But you take off with new sensations.
And I'm to comprehend,
Which one ends before another begins?

If it isn't about me
Nor is this about you...
Then what on Earth are we attracted to?

This hasn't been mentioned...
But I think you are seeking attention.
And I wouldn't mind,
To receive that from you sometimes!

If I like what I see...
And you say the same of me,
Then what is it together
Are we wishing the other to be?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marci Made 09 July 2007

Your best? that's all one can be or offer, the best of themselves.....then perhaps romance would last and actually work for better or worse...What a rare thing that would be.! ! ! good one Mr.Ct.~~~stay cool....marci.xo

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