What Is More Attractive - Eyes /Style/ Mindattitude /Smile Poem by Prabir Gayen

What Is More Attractive - Eyes /Style/ Mindattitude /Smile

Rating: 4.1


What is more attractive -
Eyes /style/ mind
attitude /Smile
(Query)
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Eyes are dewy,
Like fresh flower,
Broad like lotus.

Style is sweet joy,
Look like amour,
You walk like pain,
That pierce heart.

Mind is loaded with
Thought fanciful,
Soft and cool, likable,
Through the mirror
of the face it comes out.

Attitude is like killing,
Through eyes it oozes,
Like orange roses you look,
Full of tender juice,
Inviting to suck.

Smile is like full moon night,
Sometimes with stars,
Sometimes with
patch of clouds,
From eyes it spreads
through cheeks,
Into lips it invite to kiss,
In a word you are
beauty beyond mind.

Other part I do not know
May be your bosom
Is velvety or sensitive,
Juicy or solid joy,
Full of warm increasing ever.
May be red or slightly hot.

May be womb is deep,
Like oceanic thick,
May be sweeter than the rest,
Hotter than the hottest.

Don't think of buttock,
It is always deep like hills,
It makes one fanciful,
It is colourful beyond colour,
It paves the way to heart.

Let me speak about heart,
It nurtures feelings with care,
When mind is hot heart is cold,
It purifies the vein with urge,
Your heart is pure like heaven.
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Saturday, February 16, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 16 February 2019

The Human Being Outside-In and Inside-Out analyzed by the Very Productive Pen of Poet Prabir Gayen. More than a human being deserves. Excellently rendered and a fascinating poem. A 10 and much more. Thank you for sharing

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Mahtab Bangalee 18 February 2019

i think its your one of the best philosophical writings // love it

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Meethi Mondal 17 February 2019

Let me speak about heart, It nurtures feelings with care, When mind is hot heart is cold, It purifies the vein with urge, Your heart is pure like heaven..,

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Meethi Mondal 17 February 2019

Let me speak about heart, It nurtures feelings with care, When mind is hot heart is cold, It purifies the vein with urge, Your heart is pure like heaven

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 16 February 2019

PG SIR ROMANCER POET BE ONE YOU HAVE THE INK AND ACUMEN BE LIKE ME A POET OF ROMANCE ALL COME TO READ ME FROM ITALY AND FRANCE COME TO CANADA ALONG WITH ME AND DANCE POETRY IS LOVELY WHEN IT'S PURE AND FRANK AND WINE RED ALONG READING IT IS DRANK 10000000000000000000+++++++++ POINTS FOR THIS ONE COME OUT WITH MORE JUICIER ONES PGGGGGGGGGGGG

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Aniruddha Pathak 16 February 2019

A romantic pen getting spiritual towards the end, apart, very imaginatively written. A productive and fertile pen I never knew before. Good read, Prabir Gayen. Yes, life swings on two extremes.

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