What's A Tear Drop? Poem by Zahra Shariat

What's A Tear Drop?

Rating: 3.5


-What's a tear drop? did you ever know?
-It's NaCl dissolved in H2O!

-Can you help my broken heart my sole injury?
-I can't do operations like Heart Surgery

-this means you don't mind emotions a bit?
(a thinking moment passed) , 'I must Google it! '

this boring dialogue she prefered to stop
she left that 'Intelligent Companion' shop

Monday, November 5, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: emotions
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daegonius Bonapartae 30 November 2012

you humans have got to be kidding me seriously. something like this forgery is so simplistic a mere infant could have typed it. It leads me to question any of you to even calling yourself poets. simply astounding how you imbeciles think this kindergarten rhyme is a master piece simply embarressing to even mention it

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Mousa Mohammadnia 29 November 2012

So good. I enjoyed. I'm waiting for reading you more poet!

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Kelly Seale 15 November 2012

Zahra, this was quite a refreshing read- You allowed your muse to entertain us, with wit... even though he was a bore, and I loved how it all ended whith you walking out the door... Outstanding Ink! Loved it! ; -) -Kelly.

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Nader Baheri 06 November 2012

nicely penned dear zahra with marvelous rhyme.teaches us chemistry too.enjoyed it muchas gracias for sharing~nb

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Zahra Shariat 06 November 2012

well, thank you but, i think it has some rhythm strikes!

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Dr Antony Theodore 20 December 2015

Can you help my broken heart my sole injury? thank u very much for sharing with us your painful emotions. tony

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 13 July 2014

the chemistry of tears and physics of the love....

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Sina Farajzadeh 07 July 2014

Hello. This is like a nrsey rhyme and not a serious work. Literature exams are not useless. One who studies this field should pass its exams. Bytheway, poetry is not just rhyming.

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Chuy Amante 23 April 2014

This is a great fast little write!

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Khalsa Majarafi 05 January 2014

WoW.....I like it every time I read it

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